The ability of managing tasks and responsibilities is of prominent importance to human being in order to succeed in coming problems. In my opinion, Modern people are required to be more planed and organized for two main reasons which I will precisely explore in the following passage.
First of all, contemporary societies have less time than before. Since a lot of new problems and tasks have emerged due to modern life, people need to use their time more efficient than the past. For example, when my father was young, the only responsibility of him was to study. In those days, the population was not as much as now, so the cost of living was less than now; Hence, he didn't need to work too hard to afford the expenses of life. Nowadays, however, students need to do lots of different works beside their studies, so they have less time to handle each of them. I, personally, have to work from morning to night at our firm along with my college assignments, because the house interest rate has increased dramatically. So, if I want to address both of these commitments, I should do my takes according to a strict plan, otherwise none of my tasks would be complete. This shows that modern students need to be more organized than their parents.
Secondly, today's problems are more complicated than the past. Several decades ago, people just had to deal with problems which were related to survival, so these difficulties weren't diverse, and people could simply handle such situations. On the other hand, new generation of people encounter a variety of complex matters. My grandfather experience is compelling evidence of this concept. About six decades ago, my grandfather used to go at his work, which was a big farming land near his house, every morning, and after he finished his work, he wasn't conditioned to do anything more. In the contrast, nowadays, life is more sophisticated and we need to deal with a lot of thing over our daily life, for example, conducting course assignments, working, following social media news, etc. As you see, modern people should organize their life, if they want to accomplish their duties.
In conclusion, I strongly believe today's individuals should be more organized than old generation of people because not only in modern societies individuals have less time than past, but also their problems and life responsibilities are more intricated which seeks more planning.
- TOEFL T P O 46 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- TPO44-Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are relate 70
- TOEFL T P O 48 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- TOEFL T P O 47 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94581280788 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7693712057 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549261083744 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6931310752 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.555555556 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16288470255 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530243309558 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035326623218 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104785872922 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175218000253 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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