i immensely agree with the statements that the life getting modern aspect and complexity thus, it is necessary for youths to manage and organize their life according to improvement occur in people life. i feel this way for two main reasons. first, carry out the life on the basis of timetable would make life steadily for a person.in addition, it complexity in life would forcing people to use their mind and ability for organization.
first of all, everyone wants to create an easier way for developing the level of their life towards success.on this base youths should have their own daily timetable to achieved their goals. for instances, a student wants to get high marks in a subject to find the way to proceed studies in university, he must do lots of effort and make a specific timetable for that subject which he needs to gain the required marks, once he walk step by step with timetable he made, obviously, the life for him would be steadily.
in addition, the life is full of difficult waves and day by day life getting its modern aspect. as well as, the life bring huge changes in human being life, confront to the conflicts make a person awake to focus on the complexities. moreover, once a person wish to live in peace and modern life, they must have variety positive plan in their mind for that, and they should show their abilities for organization of life in a proper ways.
to sum up, youth's abilities and great positive minds of them are required live the life in easy way. first, once they accustomed abilities and positive think this would help them to create modern life. on the other hand, they can solve the complexities which are facing to them in amaze way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in addition, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64548494983 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43616503075 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515050167224 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2270423372 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.272727273 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 5.45110844103 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226000172827 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960965107325 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630088993905 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148793874891 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652636926909 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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