The dramatic increase in today's complexity is conspicuously observable. Although some say that a spontaneous life would be enough for young people, I personally disagree with that. I believe that time management represented by careful planning and organizing is crucial for a happy and successful life both on the short and long terms for the following reasons.
First, the complexity of modern life is represented by the very daily activities we usually perform. I.e., as the day passes, we often do a variety of tasks, each of which is probably contingent upon the preceding one in the sense of accomplishment. What I mean is, meticulous timing and planning of one's activities across the day ensure that they all get done efficiently. In other words, people, especially the young, are in need of such careful time management in order to get those "short-lasting" activities done as perfect as possible.
Second, planning and organizing are of particular importance for long-term goals such as getting the adequate education as well as the appropriate job. As for the education, since nowadays the educational journey is so long and involved, managing these in a step-wise manner would probably be a good strategy not to miss any crucial step of education during one's lifetime. Similarly, getting a job in such a complicated era is not as easy as one might think; it requires a tremendous amount of degrees and certificates to land a secure and fairly-paid position throughout one's lifetime, hence, demanding that a person be highly organized.
Third, as the majority contends, establishing a family is something common between human beings, as it is one of the main pillars of a successfully managed life. Accordingly, it is very necessary for one to think of all the factors leading to a well-established family relationship, and that demands a lot of fastidious efforts to balance between education, work, and taking care of one's family members.
To sum up, no one doubts the ever-increasing complexity of current times, and so I totally agree that planning and organizing are of utmost importance for young people as they are still inexperienced in life. In that way, they may be able to lead a successfully-planned life.
- Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why? 90
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 83
- TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 85
- Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on points made in the reading. 3
- Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on points made in the reading. 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, hence, if, may, second, similarly, so, still, third, well, as for, i mean, such as, as well as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16164383562 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34906825995 2.67179642975 125% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550684931507 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0420552294 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.571428571 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171889041941 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651245282873 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545482230587 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105078814811 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670382304295 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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