As a matter of fact, planning has been one of the big issues for people in last decades. Some people think,they should have a complete schedule for their life. While, some people think otherwise. I personally believe, nowadays people need to know about how to have a accurate plan.
First of all, population is growing up and people are competing with each other these days. People especially young people need to know how to compete with others. They need to have a comprehensive schedule to have an ability to compete with others. For example, my father has been a successful student in his university 40 years ago. He told us about his opponents. He has believed that there was no competition between them. They don't need to have plan to be successful. As everybody can see, competition is really serious these days. In each aspect young people have to earn something hardly. For instance, in the universities or in the job market etc. These kinds of things need an accurate plan.
Second of all, time is an effective factor nowadays. People need to save their time. They need more time for their activities these days compare with 20 years before, because of more traffic and new facilities. New things need more knowledge, thus people need to consume more time to learn how to use new technologies.
Last but not least, modern life needs modern style. In the past everything was simple, but people should have some professional plans to be successful now. For instance, a plane needs a plan for its flight. Obviously no body needs to make a detailed schedule for a plane 200 years ago.
To sum up, new life style needs new abilities in people. Young people should be familiar with planning in their life to save time and be successful in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...eople in last decades. Some people think,they should have a complete schedule for the...
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Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s people need to know about how to have a accurate plan. First of all, popula...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e was no competition between them. They dont need to have plan to be successful. As ...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...on between them. They dont need to have plan to be successful. As everybody can see,...
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Line 3, column 589, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ect young people have to earn something hardly. For instance, in the universities or i...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
... needs a plan for its flight. Obviously no body needs to make a detailed schedule for a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'as a matter of fact', 'first of all', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235632183908 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.163793103448 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0977011494253 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0373563218391 0.046263068375 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.051724137931 0.0685040099705 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103448275862 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0172413793103 0.0351676179071 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.51511784626 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.051724137931 0.0309702414327 167% => OK
Particles: 0.00574712643678 0.00188951952338 304% => OK
Determiners: 0.0833333333333 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0114942528736 0.0209618222197 55% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00862068965517 0.0139019557991 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1766.0 2387.08602151 74% => OK
No of words: 307.0 408.028673835 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75244299674 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.302931596091 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205211726384 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14657980456 0.174417080927 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0977198697068 0.112833075102 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51511784626 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501628664495 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 50.3479488312 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 12.28 20.5533526081 60% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.914124508 48.84282405 51% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.64 120.699889404 59% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.28 20.5533526081 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 32.8011726384 45.7405998639 72% => OK
Elegance: 1.40909090909 1.45489161554 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312112283702 0.300154397459 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116915223193 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.123735584537 0.0752933317313 164% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.436931641151 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166784647848 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989089837335 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581778566285 0.0781384742642 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.249685161022 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.106410856481 0.067059652881 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188934845831 0.210909579961 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050844728646 0.0618886996521 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.91756272401 244% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 10.0 2.75985663082 362% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.