In general, people think that young people are unnecessary to have the ability to plan and organization, even if today’s life is very complex. They support that as modern technologies are developing drastically, beneficial tools are supported to plan and organize for people. However, the notion does not reflect the stance that I hold and should not be thought about in a different light. I believe that for young generations in complex modern society, having the ability to plan and organize is essential. This is because with these abilities, they are able to get good job opportunities and success in their life.
First of all, today’s society requires young people to have the ability to plan and organize, which as a result makes people to get good job opportunities. To be specific, in the past, the quality of technology was very poorer than nowadays. However, today’s globalized world embraced with a wide of advanced technologies. As modern society is very complex with these technologies, companies in the world also are needed to be complex strategies in order to survive for a long time. Further, they require people who want to be their employee to have the ability to plan and organize. Without the ability, people could not be an employee of where they want to enter. For example, before graduation of university, I have tried to have the ability to plan and organize. For having this ability, I participated in a lot of conferences and group studies among people who interested in improving the ability. It makes me have and improve my ability to plan and organize and eventually, after graduated the university, I had opportunities to enter where I want to enter, Samsung electronics corporations. Thus, this proves that in complex modern society, it is essential for young generations to have and improve their ability to plan and organize in order to get good job opportunities.
Moreover, in today’s fast-paced world, young people are able to success in their life only if they have the ability to plan and organize. In addition, today’s economies are more complex than in the past. And people live in gigantic information, which hold valuable information as well as garbage information. For this, they have the ability to select valuable information what they want to find out as well as plan and organize with what they collected. It makes them to succeed in their life, especially in business. This is because information is the power of success. For instance, Steve Job, who is the founder of Apple, made accomplishments in his lifetime. I read online that he was successful because he was global minded and culturally sensitive. He did this by collect valuable information from the Internet and plans his strategy in order to succeed in his life. As a result, it is legitimate to say that as modern society is very complex, young people should have the ability to plan and organization in order to success in their life.
To sum up, I believe that for young generations, it is essential to have the ability to plan and organize: getting good job opportunities and succeeding in their life. Consequently, the importance of my views cannot be underestimated in that it can kill two birds with one stone for the reasons I have mentioned above. All in all, this trend will probably continue for the next generations.
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- TPO-17 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 42
- TPO-25 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in general', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'first of all', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.166153846154 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.08 0.0866891130778 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0446153846154 0.046263068375 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0615384615385 0.0685040099705 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123076923077 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.02 0.0351676179071 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95991175235 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0538461538462 0.0309702414327 174% => OK
Particles: 0.00307692307692 0.00188951952338 163% => OK
Determiners: 0.0661538461538 0.0887237588012 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00923076923077 0.0209618222197 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138461538462 0.0139019557991 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3363.0 2387.08602151 141% => OK
No of words: 563.0 408.028673835 138% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97335701599 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87110059796 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339253996448 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273534635879 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190053285968 0.174417080927 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134991119005 0.112833075102 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95991175235 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.40674955595 0.524397521467 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.6856273341 59.2087087015 81% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1071428571 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8837339226 48.84282405 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.107142857 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1071428571 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.607142857143 0.644075263715 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 47.4606064451 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.33333333333 1.45489161554 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466756784448 0.300154397459 156% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.143685963433 0.103427244359 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108926858202 0.0752933317313 145% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.49475424196 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148967336051 0.151897553556 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197890715027 0.114077575197 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11638107803 0.0781384742642 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.556784896361 0.336927656856 165% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.09128373977 0.067059652881 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.38395698511 0.210909579961 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459977492091 0.0618886996521 74% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8870967742 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 19.0 8.42114695341 226% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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