Living in a world with so many advanced technologies and that is so complex, some characteristics of people has become not that important, whist some of them is becoming increasingly important to us. As far as I am concerned, among them is the ability to plan and organize, which is essential for today's young people.
First and foremost, a good organization let young adults make the most of their time. It is widely accepted in modern world where knowledge is expanding with remarkable speed, youngsters have a great amount of new things to learn. In classes, students tend to be bombarded with endless flow of information, illustrating the significance to make a schedule. Moreover, students also need time to socialize and play sports. Having a well-organized timetable not only makes the students learn with efficiency, it can also release them from the burden and stress of feeling too busy to accomplish tasks assigned by teachers.
Secondly, designing a plan in the long run makes young people more competitive compared to their peer groups. Youngsters should always bear in mind that in modern world, the expectation for next generation has become higher, requiring them to be as professional as possible in a certain field, which is the pre-requite for both a good performance in workplace and the ability to innovate. Therefore, were they to outstrip others in society, they would have to form a plan and get stick to it. This point is best illustrated by the example of education. If one is determined to become a scientist, he or she would need to start reading related books and receive scientific training at a relatively early age. Only by doing so can they be sufficiently prepared to win the scarce opportunity in society.
Finally, it is a life-long merit for people to be able to organize and plan for themselves. Looking back at the development of society, it is not hard to find the trend that people work for longer hours, and have less time to be with their family. This poses a threat to the family relationship, as well as the fulfillment of responsibilities as a parent. It is vividly clear that having the ability to manage time reasonably makes it easier for people to find a balance point, diminishing the conflict between multi-roles a person plays in life.
Due to aforementioned ground, I believe that it is necessary for young people to be capable of planning and organizing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9217603912 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99647990229 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550122249389 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1048365059 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237932066461 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682212390593 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056121370025 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133624954056 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334769698137 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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