In modern era, the fast-pace development today is bringing comforts and luxurious life, but it also makes the more complex human life. It should require the organization skill in the each and every field. In school to the jobs, people need the making plan for easier work. I concur the author statement that in the modern life of the younger requires the skill to make a plan and organize because of saving time and money of the organization, easily reach to goal and get the uniform work at the time.
To begin with, the proper plan is helping to get the success in the life. When a person makes a plan, he thinks the variety of approaches and huge ways before organizing the schedules. This plan helps to follow the schedule at the time to time and reach the goal. For example, in my last year of the college, I have too much concern about the study because of the final year was important for my whole result. The huge subject, seminar, and training I was very depressed but my friend suggests me that I make the schedule which helps to follow easily and study done by time to time, Finally, I was made the schedule and followed the plans to reach my goal.
Furthermore, the plan facilitates to receive the uniform work and it helps to divide a certain amount of the work in specific day and person. This plan saves time and money of the people. For instance, the owner of the manufacturing tablet, He first make organize the whole structure of the machine and worker, then, he makes list for the amount of equipment per worker so easily divide the work and get the long term uniform productivity. If he does not make a plan then not get the desirable work. Consequently, company gets the loss and also waste time for find the new ways for profits.
In conclusion, contemplating aforementioned reasons, as soon realizes that young people must have the abilities to plan and organize because of this abilities not only help in the school and college but also it is required in job and company to get the better result. I certainly agree that in modern life is very complex, it is required for younger’s to have the skill to plan and organize to get the desirable work and reach to success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...get the long term uniform productivity. If he does not make a plan then not get th...
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Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ilities to plan and organize because of this abilities not only help in the school a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54659949622 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49380708634 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450881612091 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3850078354 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8125 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8125 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221596348432 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815758872684 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572018576003 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155334911325 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687278012457 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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