tpo 49
Our relations with other people have a positive impact on our life especialy, person who sharing most time with us. From my vantage point, I believe that having a few friend for a long time has a tremendous impact on our life for the following reasons.
To began with, we could sharing important moments with our old friends because they knew every thing about us. For instance, Most my old friends have alot of information about my life. They know what I like, what cause me happy and what i dislike. when I went for my college friend last week, he cooked my fovarate food for me. In addtition, He perpared my best desert because he knew the way for making me happy is the delcious food. we had enjoy time togathers. on the othe hand, When my new coworker invated me to his house, he was made sea food for me. I could not eat any think because i had allergy to this type of food. While my old friend they try to not cook this food when i visit them. Consequentley, old fiends have a good idea about what could have a positive impact on us.
finally, long time friends could help us in a hard situations. For instane, Before many months, I made car's accident because i had appointment for work interview and i wake up too late at that time. My car damaged and my hand hurted . The first person came to my mind at that time my friend , Ali, who school 's friend, He came to acciedent location and take
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- TPO 05 3
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The opinions of celebrities such as famous entertainers and athletes are more important to younger people than they are to older people Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun friend seems to be countable; consider using: 'few friends'.
Suggestion: few friends
... vantage point, I believe that having a few friend for a long time has a tremendous impact...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on our life for the following reasons. To began with, we could sharing importa...
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Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'share'
Suggestion: share
...easons. To began with, we could sharing important moments with our old friends ...
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Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...at I like, what cause me happy and what i dislike. when I went for my college fri...
^
Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...what cause me happy and what i dislike. when I went for my college friend last week,...
^^^^
Line 4, column 437, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...r making me happy is the delcious food. we had enjoy time togathers. on the othe h...
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Line 4, column 444, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'enjoyed'.
Suggestion: enjoyed
...g me happy is the delcious food. we had enjoy time togathers. on the othe hand, When ...
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Line 4, column 444, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'enjoyed'.
Suggestion: enjoyed
...g me happy is the delcious food. we had enjoy time togathers. on the othe hand, When ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 466, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ious food. we had enjoy time togathers. on the othe hand, When my new coworker inv...
^^
Line 4, column 593, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r me. I could not eat any think because i had allergy to this type of food. While...
^
Line 4, column 629, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...use i had allergy to this type of food. While my old friend they try to not cook this...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 685, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...end they try to not cook this food when i visit them. Consequentley, old fiends h...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
... could have a positive impact on us. finally, long time friends could help us in a h...
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Line 6, column 52, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'situation'?
Suggestion: situation
...ng time friends could help us in a hard situations. For instane, Before many months, I mad...
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Line 6, column 126, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ny months, I made cars accident because i had appointment for work interview and ...
^
Line 6, column 167, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... had appointment for work interview and i wake up too late at that time. My car d...
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Line 6, column 233, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... time. My car damaged and my hand hurted . The first person came to my mind at tha...
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Line 6, column 291, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n came to my mind at that time my friend , Ali, who school s friend, He came to ac...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30566037736 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27519998007 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558490566038 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.592869053 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3125 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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