which one better to work close to your home or to live far away from your work with high salary? which one you would like ? and why?
Hectic life has a tremendous impact on our work. Some worker think that living in a far distance with a high salary could enhance their income. From my vantage point, I believe that living near work building can have many benefits for employees for the following reasons.
To begin with, working close to your family can have a positve impact on your health. staying in a near distenation could save people effort. For instance, When I was working as a dental hygenist, I was live in 10 miles from my work. I could spend a morning time with my family and prepare a breakfast. Also, when I woke up early, I executed some physical activities. This free time helped my to have enjoyed and fun time. As a result, living in a far distenation can increase labrorers tension because they do not have a spare time to have fun eventhough they get high salary but their life too busy. They should drive for a long period to land their work building. Moreover, they will expose for street crowding. All these could have a high risk for worker because They will stay in stress. As a result, they may expose for many diseases like blood pressure and high blood sugar.
Secondly, Working near your home can help people to save money. Most high salary workes spent a lot of money because they have many commitments. For instance, employees who live far away from their work. They should pay money for many expences like car mantianance, fuel, car insurance, and toll which is pay high way in order to reach fast. Moreover, they should pay for get launch food. For instance, my brother every day comes back to home to have a food's launch. He saves a lot of money because resturants' food too expensive. If people have a high salary but they live in a far distance, they will pay their money in many things. They will not save money
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...mendous impact on our work. Some worker think that living in a far distance with a hi...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Staying
...n have a positve impact on your health. staying in a near distenation could save people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54711246201 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29059977144 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495440729483 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2090246691 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0434782609 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3043478261 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227654675093 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730224854504 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723419870049 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175475117568 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00897371996996 0.0645574589148 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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