TPO 49
Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that preserving old friendships is more imporatnt than make new friends easily. Cotrary, to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that today ability of make friendship with new people jave espesial impat for success in the job and also social relationships. Because, having relationship with important and powerful people can have a lot of benefits for them. I, to a great extent agree with this idea that ability to maintain friendship for the loang period of time with small number of people is more important than the ability of make new friends easily.
First and foremost, we can have close relationship with our friend just when we have realationship with them for a loang time. Because, we can confidence about people only when we have complete knowledge about them. Especially, now we live in the society that most of the people should leave their own family and town and migrate to another cities. Thus the importance of have close frieds is more sensable. We should be have people talk about our concern and happiness and our problems. We need someone to get advice from them. And this happen by very close friends.
On another significant fact that should be taken into the cosideration is that based on psychologist ideas people who make relationship with others just because of following some special amis have lower influence on the socity and most of valuable laws that stablished the base of our behavior produced by people who make friendship with people because of just friendship relationship not because of some economical or another benefits. This people have leadership role in our socity and between people.
Finally, yet importantly, people without close friend always feeling alone. The people that just make friends for some benefites never cannot be confidence that their friends are trust with them. One of clear example of this fact, we can see in the big comarcial companies. People that seems to they are very good friend together overlay eachptherand try to use from this relationship just for their own benefits.
On the baise of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that people that have this ability of maintaie their own friendship are happier than who can make new friends easily. becuaes, a deep friendship obtain just through loang relationship with people and based on several spychological concepts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 501, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ty to maintain friendship for the loang period of time with small number of people is more imp...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...alationship with them for a loang time. Because, we can confidence about people only wh...
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Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...and town and migrate to another cities. Thus the importance of have close frieds is ...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had'?
Suggestion: had
...e frieds is more sensable. We should be have people talk about our concern and happi...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...of some economical or another benefits. This people have leadership role in our soci...
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Line 9, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Becuaes
...r than who can make new friends easily. becuaes, a deep friendship obtain just through ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, still, thus, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08585858586 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61656621028 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479797979798 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.242009546 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8421052632 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15789473684 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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