People need to maintain a friendship for being happy which is the vital step in everyone`s life. In recent decades, there is a discussion among people who think keeping a relation between people helps us for a better life. In my opinion, I would adamantly agree with the concept of the boundary between old friends make a powerful boundary and we should spend our time with them for having a pleasant life.
First and the foremost, friendship based on trustworthiness give us a chance to share our thought to each other. When we know a group of people for a long time in happiest and saddest day of our life. The strong connection with our friends subconsciously gives us hope to continue our life. To give an example, I met two of my close friend nine years ago, since we were in high school. we help each other in every aspect our life to achieve our goal which was entering medical school. In order to compete with other students, we promised to help each other and if one of us lost her hopes does not let her settle down to her goal. Therefore, we got higher scores to take part in the university.
Second, one of the advantages of old friendship is that we can count on our friends during hardship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 387, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ears ago, since we were in high school. we help each other in every aspect our lif...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 1977.66487455 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 221.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49321266968 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56763309419 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58371040724 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 618.680645161 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9363516149 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2727272727 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142881750551 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600086234093 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050847740612 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105275229102 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639367399831 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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