Humans are a social being/entity. The great majority of people are inclined to have some friends. Some people just have some close friends during their lives, while some people have plenty new friends. In my opinion, people need to old friends rather than various and plentiful new friends for happiness. Since, we can express our feeling with our close friends. We are more comfortable with old friends. In addition, old friends help to each other more than new friends.
First, everybody sometimes wants to express her intrinsic feeling. In better words, we need to speak with somebody about some private issues. we can just express some feeling to our old friends. For example, when we love somebody, we need to speak with a close friend about him/her. We think that we need somebody to listen our words. In addition, sometimes we need to talk with a close friend about our families and parents’ situations. Most of the people are emotional and they need to have intrinsic happiness. A close friend helps us to balance our feeling during time. We cannot express our feeling to new friends. Therefore, old friends are crucial for everybody to be happy.
Second, we are more comfortable with our old friends. When we are with new friends, we should pay attention to our behavior. Sometimes, we act for new friends and we cannot behave like our close friends. For example, some people are greedy and want to eat some junk foods, but when they go to restaurant with new friends, they try to eat less and healthy foods, since they want just to show off that they have a healthy lifestyle. In better words, we are more honest with our old friends, we feel more comfortable when we are spending time with them.
Third, close friends can help us better in distress and hard situations. For example, when we are in financial distress, just a close friend can lend some money to us. In addition, when we want to ask help, like request somebody to buy something or help to solve a problem, we should call to our close friends. They are not a good weather friends like new friends.
All in all, although making friends with new people is interesting and we can learn many things from new people, just our close friends are a good supporter in terrible situations and we can just trust to old friends for expressing our feelings.
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- TPO-46 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.Use specific reasons and examp 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd plentiful new friends for happiness. Since, we can express our feeling with our cl...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ith somebody about some private issues. we can just express some feeling to our ol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, third, while, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74692874693 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42885349594 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.383292383292 0.524837075471 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2563073468 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5555555556 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0740740741 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40740740741 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150339515104 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620826501385 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440594392815 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115104315798 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419796221033 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.2 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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