tpo11- Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others
think access to much information creates problems.
With developments in technology, there are recent debates over whether getting access to a lot of information by means of internet is a good idea or not. Different people hold different views due to their distinct backgrounds and perspectives. Some people think that the internet provides us numerous valuable information while others believe that access to so much information creates problems. As a matter of fact, the issue of accessing to information on the internet is so complicated and controversial that it is impossible to find a universal answer to this question. Nevertheless, I endorse that, to some extent, accessing to plenty of get-at-able information on the internet is a big opportunity for our society. In order to substantiate my vantage points, I would like to address some of the key evidence: It is an appropriate amusement in life; and also, it has a vital role for students in the university.
In the first place, getting a huge amount of information on the internet plays a crucial role in student life which facilitate conducting projects and doing assignments for them and also there is various information about a topic which allows them that see a subjects from many perspectives that broaden their knowledge and expand their horizon. Besides that, internet enable students to communicate with their friends and other professors in different parts of the world which they are able to ask their question and solve their problems. One of the striking examples, last year I was doing my thesis during my masters, when my supervisor was not available most of the time. Thus, I emailed him and other professors and consulted about problems of my project with them which helped me a lot.
Along the same line, another privilege of the aforementioned idea; by using the internet buying things bas been very comfortable. When people want to purchase goods, they could gain abundant information which enable them to see diverse goods form different companies and brands with varied colors and designs more carefully. Moreover, by means of data on the net people could design their home whatever they want. For instance, my mom designs our home four times a year fits four seasons of the year.
To put the issue into perspective, by taking into account these entire aspects, we can safely draw the conclusion that internet provides us valuable information which make life easy for anyone with different needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 791, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...vantage points, I would like to address some of the key evidence: It is an appropriate amus...
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Line 2, column 258, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a subject' or simply 'subjects'?
Suggestion: a subject; subjects
...bout a topic which allows them that see a subjects from many perspectives that broaden the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for instance, as a matter of fact, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06982543641 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84469252215 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558603491272 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4775200804 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.533333333 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7333333333 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282716900083 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975921220855 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108041269743 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165409739637 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117741101593 0.0645574589148 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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