TPO23(independent)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
The question of weather that work quickly with mistakes is better than work slow without mistakes or not, has always been a controvesaly topic among people.
In one spot, some people believe that, they have to take risks and work in a fast way with some mistakes. Otherwise, some people prefer to make sure about everything and work slowly.
I firmly assert with a second category of people for the following reasons.
First, recently, life has become too costly, and everything that you want to do, is expensive.
In my opinion, people have to be care full about their situation, and they try to work in a accury way because if they make mistakes, they will have to spend more energy and money. When I was a university student, I worked in a project in a labratoary. Unfortunately, I did not have enough knowledge, and I just red two articles and ask some questions from my professor and my classmates. In a frankly, I wanted to take a risk and did that project in a fast way, but in a hancher I could not continiue my work because it did not work, so I had to start a new one. Besides, because of cost of material the university did not give me fund to buy a new material, so I had to buy with my own money. that experience, was too expensive for me.
second, now a days, some people participate in more competitions, they work hard, and keep themselves update. they try to explor in differents web site and learn new things. In addition, they use experience's generation, so in this case if you want to rival with them you will have to be sure, and try not to make mistakes because you do not have a chance to correct your mistakes.
All in all, because of situation in today's world, we have to work slowly and make sure because we do not have enugh time to correct them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: ASK_WETHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whether'?
Suggestion: whether
The question of weather that work quickly with mistakes is bett...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fast way" with adverb for "fast"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... that, they have to take risks and work in a fast way with some mistakes. Otherwise, some peo...
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Line 17, column 91, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...heir situation, and they try to work in a accury way because if they make mistake...
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Line 17, column 449, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fast way" with adverb for "fast"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ted to take a risk and did that project in a fast way, but in a hancher I could not continiue...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ial, so I had to buy with my own money. that experience, was too expensive for me. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...erience, was too expensive for me. second, now a days, some people participate in...
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Line 21, column 9, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... was too expensive for me. second, now a days, some people participate in more compet...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... too expensive for me. second, now a days, some people participate in more compet...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... work hard, and keep themselves update. they try to explor in differents web site an...
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Line 21, column 144, Rule ID: WEB_SITE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
...pdate. they try to explor in differents web site and learn new things. In addition, they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, frankly, if, second, so, as to, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46666666667 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56302736516 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509090909091 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4698707647 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2666666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295355431694 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965013882526 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752169918689 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150257517553 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570222962673 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.