tpo28-independent
Nowedays, children are in a eclectic and various hazardous conditions. they' re really important for society because they will include the population in the future. some parents are quite caring about their dear kids' education. some others don't drasticaly care about this significant issue. I, personally speaking, feel that parents are much more involved in their children's education in these days than parents in the past. In what follows, the reasons supporting my viewpoint, are vindicated.
To begin with, as time went on, an important and worth considering thing related to parents which be enriched is their knowledge. On the other word, parents have been educated in these days more than past, and this causes them to identify the circumstances around their dear kids. Hence, they would promote and encourage to help their children's raising by having a great and close band with their school or their envoirment which they connect to. To put it in a more vivid picture, my uncle is a civil engineer. he always concerned and worried about my cousins. Once, I asked him about his significant concern. he told me when he was reading an article about engineering problems, he found out the reason which made the engineers not to listen their adviser was that they had some problems in their educating process, so I don't want my kids will do as the same as they did in their job.
Furthermore, it would be helpful and efficient in their future life. Well educating would enable them to decide properly in the sensetive and dangerous situations. For instance, when I was at elementry school, I had a instructor who told me that it would be really secure in my important decisions if I had a back-up option. I supposed to contribute with one of gait analysis in Tehran, but it wasn't quite determined and distinct. so I wondered about another clinic to go there as an back-up option. Finally, it could be useful, and I choosed the second option.
In conclusion, taking all the aforementioned reasons, in my book parents pay more attention in their kids' education. that's because of deciding correctly and parent's knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, really, second, so, well, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92757660167 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70127780747 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571030640669 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.4272132923 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2380952381 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0952380952 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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