TPO39
Do you agree or disagree?
In the past it was easier identify what kind of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
Nowadays, our job plays an important role in our lives. Genuinely, it determines our level of success. Although a plethora of people hold the opinion that individuals were able to recognize profitable careers in the past easier. Others disagree with this point of view. Although a certain conclusion cannot be made, I, to a great extent, hold this viewpoint that in the present time, people can distinguish that which jobs are more secure and will lead to prosperity. Among countless reasons, which can vindicate my vantage point, I will mention the two most conspicuous ones through the following paragraphs.
The first reason that juts out of my mind easily at the first moment of thinking about this issue is the fact that human beings are more knowledgeable than they were in the past. Indeed, they have excellent access to a great hosts of information sources, such as the internet, social networks and so on. Hence, they can do some researches through these sources, and find which careers is far more suitable for them and then apply for it. Furthermore, they can consult with others, and take favorable advice. To make a tangible example, consider a student who graduated from high school and he is going to enroll in a university. He can search in the internet and find jobs that provide more reliable future for him, then choose his major according to those jobs. By doing so, he will be sure that after graduation he will be able to be hired in that particular career and as a result, become more successful. As it is clear, the more individuals have information, the better future they would have.
The second and equally exquisite proof for this assertion is about this importance that nowadays the number of jobs is more than the number of people who are in the age that can accomplish them. In other words, by technology development, numerous jobs become available, and persons have more freedom to select a lucrative one.
; therefore, everyone can select a career, which is more lucrative and would lead to
- Which one do you prefer? Why?A company offering you a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days or another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but has more vacation days. 70
- TPO45In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 12
- TPO39Do you agree or disagree?In the past it was easier identify what kind of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future. 40
- Some people think the media including newspapers, televisions, radio and internet sources are less concerned about the accuracy of news. They think the information from the media is becoming incorrect.Do you agree or disagree? 76
- TPO 45 In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly, it determines our level of success. Although a plethora of people hold the opinion t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in conclusion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 13.8261648746 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 52.1666666667 25% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 511.0 1977.66487455 26% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 99.0 407.700716846 24% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16161616162 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.15434214553 4.48103885553 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75500305489 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 212.727598566 36% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.767676767677 0.524837075471 146% => OK
syllable_count: 153.9 618.680645161 25% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.0995314573 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1666666667 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114075884781 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529608448708 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334806982368 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114075884781 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 86.8835125448 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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