TPO 49- Integrated essay
The article states that humpback whales navigate by using the stars and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor finds all the ideas dubious and unconvincing and presents some counter evidence to refute them all.
First, the reading states that humpback whales are clever. Conversely, the lecturer claims that this assertion is fascinating and none of its evidence are convincing. He explains that some ducks, which are not very inteligent, migrate regularly. Hence, their navigating ability is instinctly and they born with it. Consequently, this reason is not convincing.
Second, the article claims that humpback whales migrate in straight lines. On the contrary, the professor extends that they do it by using an external force, which is magnetic field. Actually, one part of their brain, which is called biomagnetite, is sensitive to magnetic field. Therefore, they find their way thanks to this part of their brains.
Third, the reading avers that they raise their head above the water, look upward, and then find their migration way. In contrast, the lecturer opposes this point by saying that some animals, such as sharks, do the same thing, but they are looking for the pray. Furthermore, during the day there is no star in the sky; therefore, this claim that they use stars for orientation is completely skeptical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, conversely, first, furthermore, hence, however, look, second, so, then, therefore, third, in contrast, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 216.0 270.72406181 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23611111111 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58954433895 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 145.348785872 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3150549885 49.2860985944 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7857142857 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06452816374 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339354321094 0.272083759551 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111597491962 0.0996497079465 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698574581774 0.0662205650399 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192436308795 0.162205337803 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269044815805 0.0443174109184 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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