TPO_43: Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect. In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?
-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away
-Wait until the class or meeting is over and the people are gone, and then talk to the teacher or meeting leader
-Say nothing
Behavior in a classroom or meeting is very momentous and asking question during the presentation is sometimes allowable but in many cases asking problems is not permissible and it is regarded an impolite manner. behavior of people in a classroom or appointment are varied. some individuals prefer to interrupt the lecturer and correct his/her mistakes hastily but some people ignore the slip ups during lectures and stay dormant. personally, I think that audiences should behave moderately in such situations. I mean they should correct the lecturer after presentation without any disruption. I believe this way because of some noticeable reasons which I will explain them in the following.
First, interrupting a teacher or a professor is not moral manner. Furthermore, it has some negative outcomes on the presenter. I will distract him/her and maybe he/she will forget the main purpose of the presentation because of mental engagement or feeling of embarrassment. I want to share on of my personal experiences in this ground. I had a scientific presentation in one of my university courses. I did my best to cope with this task. I investigated on a various fields to fulfill the requirements for an acceptable presentation. Finally, my important day arrived and I started my deliberation. during my lecture I erred a very manifest matter due to my severe stress and meanwhile, one the listeners asked about that matter. He distracted me thoroughly and I urged to answer him but because of my mental occupation due to my previous error, I completely forgot rest of my presentation. that's why I think it is not fair to ask inquiry during any speech.
In conclusion, I should assert that I prefer not to disrupt a presenter during lecture because not only it leads to distraction but also it will diminish his/her self-confidence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, so, while, i mean, i think, in conclusion, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10299003322 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19324584391 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56146179402 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7793279936 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0531403690931 0.236089414692 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0186757578947 0.076458572812 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262791110624 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0340281998822 0.150856017488 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352397765031 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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