TPO53
Do you agree or disagree?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve internet access than to public transportation.
one of the most crucial subject in every society is public transportation which the government has devoted some money to improve it recently. In my point of view, people were profoundly affected by public transportation, and it has a strong influence on poeple's life because of the removing contamination from the environment, reduce economy's problems and job opportunity.
First, every day we face some issuese which is related to the environment, it is a big deal which the government pay attention to it. In the past there did not use to be as many as public transportation, but recently, the huge number of railroads, subway staion and private bus's line have been builted in my mother country which extremelly thanks to the government.
Second, the government is thinking and solving problems which people face them. one of the biggest issue in every society is economy. By creating public tarnsportation, the government help us alot. Actually, the cost of using public transportation is more cheaper than own cars or taxis. In addition, cummuters have had always spend some money in the way. it helps them to save money for their rainy days. For instance, in the past my father had use his own car, at that time he spent money to fix his car and buy gasoling, but he has used public transportation for five years. Furthermore, he had saved money to exchange his old car.
Third, another problem among people is finding a good job. most young people have hired as a securiters, salesperson and driver in subway stations since it builted. thanks to the government to this such a great job opportunity. one of my brother is a soldier, he does not have enough time. he works in the subway station as a ticket salesperson as a part time job.
Although some people believe that, the government pay attantion to improve Internet access, I firmly believe the government help us, and has spent money to develope public transportation to help to the environment, reduce economy's problems and job vacancy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
one of the most crucial subject in every so...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ention to it. In the past there did not use to be as many as public transportation,...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...olving problems which people face them. one of the biggest issue in every society i...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
... cost of using public transportation is more cheaper than own cars or taxis. In addition, cu...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... In addition, cummuters have had always spend some money in the way. it helps them to...
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Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...had always spend some money in the way. it helps them to save money for their rain...
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Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'used'.
Suggestion: used
...For instance, in the past my father had use his own car, at that time he spent mone...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
...lem among people is finding a good job. most young people have hired as a securiters...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanks
...er in subway stations since it builted. thanks to the government to this such a great ...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...t to this such a great job opportunity. one of my brother is a soldier, he does not...
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Line 7, column 291, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
... soldier, he does not have enough time. he works in the subway station as a ticket...
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Line 7, column 351, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ay station as a ticket salesperson as a part time job. Although some people believe th...
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Line 9, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...duce economys problems and job vacancy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, third, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91764705882 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90957136643 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526470588235 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5180751449 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8888888889 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218776179656 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655935651487 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659568758135 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118664889395 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803114056327 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.