Some people like to work in teams. Others prefer to work alone. Which do you prefer? Give
specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I think every person has had work in a team one in one life. Team-working has some benefits that I have experienced during my student’s time which was worthwhile to me, so I always prefer to work in a team because of two reasons.
First, when you work in a team, you can discus with your team-worker, and get advices from them. In this case, you will be able to think better, and solve problems very well. For instance, when I was a university student, my classmates and I formed a group to work in a nanotubes. At the beginning, it was extremely difficult because everyone wanted to work alone, but after a while we found that, if we had work with each other, we would created that material very quickly.
Second, by working in a group, you become responsible because in groups everyone has an especial responsible to do. When students accept to work in a group, they will learn who to do their specific task without any delay and argument.
On the other hand, working in a group give you opportunity to make friends which I think it is really worthwhile. One of my best friend was one of my team-worker in the high school that we have been friends for nine years.
In conclusion, I prefer and enjoy working in a group with old or new team-workers because of specific responsibility and get different advices. Also, I believe that the advantages of working in a group basically outweigh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 440, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...f we had work with each other, we would created that material very quickly. Second, by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 251.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56573705179 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73576116221 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569721115538 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8859917704 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317018984184 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123251118101 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071399989654 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182119336325 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044828333473 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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