Some people like to work in teams. Others prefer to work alone. Which do you prefer? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays people are busier than before. They have to manage their jobs, families and many thing on time. This causes that people fulfill their jobs in the group or team. Despite this fact, some people believe in working alone. They are against the team jobs. In the team work, the project tasks have divided into people that named team members which was instructed by the leader. The team work has many advantages over solitary work. These are distribution of task among others, assistant of members and friendship with new people.
In the team work, members could share their ideas and thoughts with each other. This may cause many consequences, For example with the presentation of ideas, members and also leader could argue about suggestions and finally find the pros and cons of each one. Eventually, they will choose the best thought. Although it will be beneficial for the result of the project, some members may not happy about this, because their ideas may not considered.
Since the project will conduct to many people and tasks divide between members, it will finish earlier. Everyone will assign to do jobs in their experienced field. for instances, Consider the project that needs to have background information in mathematics, while you are familiar in mentioned field. On the other hand, definition and explanation duties for people is omitted in working alone and ones has to solve problems individually. Furthermore, in the solitary work the need to organize and plan the team is eliminated.
Other profit of working with members is having friendship with new people. Working with our team partners may lead to have friendship and enjoy being with each other. Conversely, In the solitary work, the tasks will fulfill lonely which may be uninteresting.
As I previously mentioned, one holding the projects, must gather people in the team to divide tasks between members so the time spending for project will be minimized. In addition, projects will not have the best result unless team work does not employ.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'conversely', 'finally', 'furthermore', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255319148936 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.164893617021 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0558510638298 0.0866891130778 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0398936170213 0.046263068375 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0345744680851 0.0685040099705 50% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135638297872 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0425531914894 0.0351676179071 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50527966294 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212765957447 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0904255319149 0.0887237588012 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0425531914894 0.0209618222197 203% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0106382978723 0.0139019557991 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2027.0 2387.08602151 85% => OK
No of words: 334.0 408.028673835 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06886227545 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344311377246 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254491017964 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.149700598802 0.174417080927 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0928143712575 0.112833075102 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50527966294 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51497005988 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 53.737771185 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1818181818 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8461918916 48.84282405 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1363636364 120.699889404 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.590909090909 0.644075263715 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 40.6309199782 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.81111111111 1.45489161554 124% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202188245484 0.300154397459 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133857763973 0.103427244359 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0953276951543 0.0752933317313 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.503159221248 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15246754301 0.151897553556 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837776918637 0.114077575197 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491857522789 0.0781384742642 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.281898624129 0.336927656856 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0480040391786 0.067059652881 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140623044942 0.210909579961 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691300055008 0.0618886996521 112% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.