From the dawn of civilization to modern times, transportation played crucial role in each society. A controversial question, recently raised about, cars will be more in the futures. There are many inventions which deserve to write some word but cars is critical and permanent than the others. I believe that the depend on vehicle will be more. I have several reasons such as transportation, environment friends cars and technologies.
First of all, the foremost reasons coming to my mind is that air polution which effect the ozone layers adversly. Firms which aim to attain their goal use cars as a trade tools and this is mean, without cars world trade is nothing. Moreover, the population of World has skyrocketed compared to last decades So, new population is the other name is extra consume and hence the need of using car will be more than expecting. Therefore, someone should stop this circle which is deplating ozone layer.
Secondly, another imperative reason to deserve some word to say is environment friends car with another word is green cars. The global warming has been had devastating effect on our mother nature. The government force companies to find nature friends solutions which do not harm nature . Furthermore, they decrease tax on development research. Even today there are many cars which work by electricity power.
Last but not least, last reason is increasing literacy rate. According to a research study conducted at MIT, by reputable team of scientist,(at MIT), it was found the car accident have correlation with literacy rate. The more educated driver is the less car accident. Since, literacy rate decrease, car accident has increase compared last decades.
In conlusion, there are numerous reasons which can be persuasive enough to corroborate my view. Having analyzed the reasons above, one can questionate the cost of driving cars are. I highly recommend that goverment goverment should look for more nature friends way. I believe every country should find innovative solution to this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rmanent than the others. I believe that the depend on vehicle will be more in the future. ...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...iends solutions which do not harm nature . Furthermore, they decrease tax on devel...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'surveys'' or 'survey's'?
Suggestion: surveys'; survey's
...ive car. For example, according to last surveys car accident has dropped. Although, dri...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... people find the way which overcome. Finally The reasons which I write above clearly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18620689655 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7826522812 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575862068966 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.1066168628 48.9658058833 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.6666666667 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0833333333 20.6045352989 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221827182245 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620602829039 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914274092422 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125006408683 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500108499931 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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