People living in 21th century are more dependent on technology and innovation, mainly today’s society is decorated with instruments and scientific models. This progress in science fully effect on the living condition of people, so, now a days we can’t live without any instruments. Cars which are one of the most brilliant innovations of science reduce the valuable time and make the people to travel easily and comfortably. Therefore, day to day, the numbers of cars are increasing, so, I don’t bolster this statement based on the following reasons.
First, the demand increases when population increases in any country. Day to day, the population is increasing, so, they need more luxury instruments for better relaxation. Therefore, the demand of the car is also increasing. For example, in our area in India, now the population is three times more than the previous ten years, so, naturally the streets are more crowded due to high traffic than the previous ten years.
Second, now a day people like to spend better life, that’s why, they migrate from rural area to urban area for their better income; this is the one reason for overcrowding. Besides, the raw materials which are used for making the car become less expensive and easily available. So, the price of car is decreasing day to day and people more like to show interest to buy the luxury cars.
Third, time is so precious if someone wants to become success. So, saving the time can help you for better improvement. In ancient periods, people like to travel on foot, so, it is so much time consuming and even after the long travel, people became very much exhausted. But using the car, people can save their valuable time and also they can use their potential energy on another purpose for their better improvement. For this reason, the demand of the car is expanding.
Actually, fuel is the main source to conduct the car, so, it is driven by nonrenewable source. That’s why pollution is the main problem now a day because it exhausts poisonous gas into air. So, scientists are trying to build a new car which can be conducted by the renewable sources like sunlight or wind power. Increasing the car in future, it can be a nightmare for the human beings, so, we have to control our using car to build a salubrious society. If today we are unable to control the increasing rate of the car then our future generation will suffer to live in this world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... on the living condition of people, so, now a days we can't live without any instrume...
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Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...the living condition of people, so, now a days we can't live without any instrume...
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Line 9, column 337, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...light or wind power. Increasing the car in future, it can be a nightmare for the human be...
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Line 9, column 460, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sing car to build a salubrious society. If today we are unable to control the incr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, third, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85918854415 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66187152297 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503579952267 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1028157074 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9523809524 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9523809524 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19047619048 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15025900985 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505648131381 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504620128367 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875240308843 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533448764191 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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