In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today

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In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

Many people say that there would be more cars in the future than today because of current high population and increasing demand for cars. However, I strongly agree that, there will be fewer cars in the future than there are now. I will explain my opinion with the following three reasons.

First of all, we need natural resources like petrol or diesel to run a car. With limited presence, causing high prices of these resources, many people would prefer not to use cars. We can see prices of petrol and diesel are increasing not only year by year, but even day by day. If this trend continues, many people will not consider using car at all. If we would have more natural resources, this scenario would have been different. Thus I believe, there will be less cars in the coming twenty years in future.

Secondly, increasing pollution have cause many people to stop using personal vehicles. Now a days, many people are cautious and aware about environmental impact of hazardous gasses released by vehicles which is causing pollution in the environment. Many awareness programs on the same topics are being conducted on many levels. This is making people realize not to use personal vehicles, such as cars or motorcycles. If gasses released by vehicles would not have impacted environment, most environmentalists would be in favor of using vehicles, which is sadly not a case. Therefore, this realization of environmental impact will reduce the number of cars on the roads in near future.

Finally, many opportunities for public transport provided by government will reduce the traffic of vehicles. Projects like increasing number of local trains, building metro routes and metro stations, cheaper available services for cycles will provide better access to people to commute. This sources are again cheaper, which will make people easily transform to use private transport to public transport. Absence of such projects and opportunities would have make people to own more vehicles, which is again not the case. So, I believe these new approaches will result in fewer cars in the coming twenty years than today.

Some people might say that with invention of electric vehicles or invention of hydrogen energy, number of cars will increase which makes this topic debatable. But with the reasons I have mentioned, I strongly agree that number of cars will be fewer in next twenty years.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...be less cars in the coming twenty years in future. Secondly, increasing pollution have...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, such as, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06075949367 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59787545851 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486075949367 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5930018927 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8636363636 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9545454545 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95454545455 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38178512556 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125089634475 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12492472226 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231616694236 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653458094651 0.0645574589148 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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