Cars are used everyday by millions of people and it seems preposterous for them to use it less in the forthcoming. But I , actually, believe that some years will pass and we will see none of them on the roads. The reasons of it are quite incomplex. Firstly, people care about ecology, while cars destroy it. Secondly, even if people don’t think about nature, they think about their bodies and heath. Accordingly, no auto machine make people move more, providing them a small cardio exercise.
To begin with, it is no doubt that motor vehicles pollute the Earth, and while the humanity is interested in making our environment ecologically free, the machines would not be much in a value. But there are also certain alternatives in a face of public transport, which have the lower level of carbon dioxide and chemicals. I remember when the trend to use eco-friendly cars started my family decided to switch to buses instead of cars, cheering other relatives and friends doing the same thing. It’s worth mentioning that living in a small town, my family inspired a lot of people into that way of moving in the city. If we didn’t think of ecology, the surroundings we live in wouldn’t be that clean and full of health air.
Another point is that people are more and more fond of sports and exercising. However, sometimes adults do not have enough time to visit sport clubs or yoga classes, choosing a simple way of keeping fit - walking. By preferring underground, trolleybuses, buses and bikes we move all the muscles in our body without being under pressure as it usually takes not more than 30 minutes to come to the nearest station. That leads to forgetting about using even taxis, which is happened to my friend Ron. Young man disliked sport but walking as a way to get to some destination still keeps him healthy and inspired by the sceneries he sees everyday going to his office. Well, more and more people realize the same opportunity, which they would not get with an auto mobile.
To sum up, cars will be fewer in use than there are today as men and women understand its bad consequences for humans and nature in general. The less we use cars - the cleaner the Earth and the healthier we are.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to use it less in the forthcoming. But I , actually, believe that some years will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, in general, no doubt, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68380462725 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52645313257 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591259640103 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0152971566 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8947368421 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94736842105 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228078989473 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608889514076 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915004208365 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159151313595 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125617056122 0.0645574589148 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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