Right of education is the same for all and from that point of view, I believe universities should be free. I would like to express my feelings on this topic in this short essay.
We need to provide for our basic needs everyday and personally I think collage education is one of them. The significance of this high education is that it opens the door for wealthy life, higher life standards, a good carrier. Since all of us are equal as a globe so, it must be our choice to have a university education rather than a luxury. Because we see many brilliant mind vanish away or ruin in wrong places just because they did not have enough money for university education. It is very heart breaking that to lose many future lives because of lack of money. It is not fair and in my point of view, many universities can afford scholarships moreover, can make money by hiring students for suitable jobs at school. Therefore, there is no excuse for any university to ask for fee.
Another vital point is national economy for sure. Today, the improved countries hold technology in their hands and they are the ones who run the world with no doubt. Why? Because, they have more educated, well trained workers, engineers, researchers, scientists and so on. Those countries provide free university opportunity for the students hence, those people can be professional on their field. Moreover, they are the basis of the on going economy system and they do their best to keep this routine continue. On the contrary, the undeveloped countries has almost no right on economy, technology, industry. Obviously, the main reason for that is that they do not provide a strong university education so that there is no reliable background for the employees. Uneducated people become lazy, poor and worse hopeless in time thus, most of them stop working. Nevertheless, all of the people in both kind of countries are the same and maybe have the same intelligence. Unfortunately, university education effects the life of every individual and consequently it effects the destiny of the nations.
Lastly, universities not only gives education about science but also about art and sport. Those very significant fields have various incredible departments and there are lots of talented young people who wait for go forward and gain knowledge. The success at these areas shows the level of modernness and humanity. If the students could not get the education they need, it is impossible for them to represent our country or themselves in unique area. Furthermore, It is a shame for universities to waste those natural gifts and prohibit their glow.
In a nutshell, university education make grate difference in every area and is the key for a better life. Thus, it should be free no matter what.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 40, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... We need to provide for our basic needs everyday and personally I think collage educatio...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...ld. Moreover, they are the basis of the on going economy system and they do their best t...
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Line 3, column 872, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ost of them stop working. Nevertheless, all of the people in both kind of countries are th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, i think, kind of, no doubt, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2295.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8829787234 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74232209382 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540425531915 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 743.4 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8466494804 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2692307692 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159101909129 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467244619661 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562776259985 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113317818055 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399613346452 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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