Use specific examples and evidences to support your answer.
1- trust people for future life, 2- strat to other crimes, 3-
1- make better life, 2- responsibility, 3-
1- make a good connection, 2- people help him, 3- pleasure sense
Nowadays, people accept the truth that the best time for training and learning momentous subjects during life is childhood. Here, there are three specific issue related to this matter that there is a debate among people on which subject is more indispensable rather than other. I adamantly believe that being helpful has important role in children life. That is because when you want to help other you must make a connection with them, as well as in another time, they will help you, and it is the cause of pleasure for yourself.
First and foremost, when you want help other people, you will be able to make a relation with them; therefore, it is a way that you can improve their society relations. In other words, helpful people are more popular rather than other people. For example, my brother have been helping poeple since he was child. during this time, he has made a lot of friendship and these is the cause that people our environment like him.
Moreover, as an old saying, " a good deed is never lost," if you help a person in hard situation, he will help you in another circumstance. In otherwise, people with helping to each other can gaurantee themself. For instance, couple of years ago, I had an exam that I could not prepare for that; thus, I had needed to a person to train me. There is not any person just one that I had helped him in our childhood. Consequently, when you help one, you will see their aftermath.
Finally, all of us need to have a good sense after our activities. One of these work is helping to people. To put it differently, when you help to other people, it is pleasure for themselves. As an example, in most of the time that I am upset from some problems, I usually try to help other people and make them cheer; hence, giving a good sense to other make an enjoyable sense for me.
As outlined above, it is better that children train some material in their childhood time due to having a fresh mind. Also, one the most important of subjects that they must be learned is being helpful. That is owing to making wide variety of friendships, others help him in hard setting, and make a pleasure sense for yourself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: During
...been helping poeple since he was child. during this time, he has made a lot of friends...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...saying, ' a good deed is never lost,' if you help a person in hard situation...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53196930946 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45558927651 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493606138107 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7151905064 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.55 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286985342903 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949362647762 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684551375474 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185069008449 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508320469368 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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