Your friend has the opportunity to choose either one of two types of majors (fields of study), which one of the following two majors do you think is a better choice, and why?
– A major that would allow him to finish years of study and get a degree sooner (so that he would begin to work full-time quickly). Or
– A major that requires many years of study that would provide him with more employment opportunities and offers in the future.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Be sure to use your own words. Do not memorize some certain examples.
Nowadays, there is a debate among people about the time of finding a job and make the life. Although some people think that having a job sooner is better than continuing education, other people have opposite attitude about this matter and they believe that education must be ongoing to achieve more success. In my opinion, when you have a high degree of education, you are more achievement rather than another situation. That is due to your knowledge becomes more reliable, rising your status in society, and more opportunities are available for you.
First and foremost, I believe that knowledge has a momentous role in our life and success. in other words, when you have a good knowledge, you can improve your skills and become more successful in your position. For example, I worked for a company that they wanted to expel some of the employees because of decreasing their budgets. they reject just the workers that they had a low-level degree.
Second, all of us are needed to have a good position and prestige in society; therefore, making this status requires some achievements that having an education with a high degree can improve this position among people. Otherwise, people like to be popular, even though, they are not a celebrity. For instance, people normally are attracted to people that they are hard-working; therefore, a person that has high education become one of the important people in their environment.
Last but not least, when you are graduated with a high degree, you show that have good ability and knowledge. In another side, the company is required to recruit employees with high skills. to put it differently, when you have a knowledge and you are adept, there are a huge number of positions for initiating your work. As an example, my brother graduated with a bachelor degree from the university ten years ago, but he had not found a job before he got his master degree in his major.
As outlined above, having a high education is an importance; thus, continuing can help to improve in future life, even though, you must spend more time. That is because of knowledge is a key factor in finding a job, moreover, you can change your position in society, and finding a job becomes more readily.
- TPO 42- task 1 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes people think nowadays the media (TV, newspaper, Internet) are less concerned about the accuracy of news than in the past, and the incorrect information may cause more problem to the public. 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smart phones, video games for fun and entertainment. Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for children’s deve 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smart phones, video games for fun and entertainment. Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for children’s deve 70
- TPO 41- task 1 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...es because of decreasing their budgets. they reject just the workers that they had a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... important people in their environment. Last but not least, when you are graduat...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85039370079 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62229025801 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469816272966 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8578685818 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.705882353 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4117647059 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0957890151412 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320454705772 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307841541367 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557402717501 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284052227656 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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