Vacations
Los lagos is the tenth region of Chile, it’s located between the 40°13' y el 44°3' S latitude and 74°49' a 71°34' W lenght. The total area of the region it’s about 48,583.6 km2; according to the 2017 census, it got a population of 823.000 people. The capital of the region is Puerto Montt.
For vacations it’s the most complete region in outdoor activities in the whole country; you can go to snowboard; go te beach in the lake or the sea; go kayaking; go fishing; relax at a termal bath or simply just hike the nearest volcano on the west side of the region. You could do all of this just in one week, because dedistance between places are kinda short. You should try snowbording in the morning, and then go straight out to the east and eat some sea food at some bay. But, if there is an alert of red tie, you need to avoid eating sea food.
For the people who loves hiking, this region it’s perfect for that, beacuse there are 9 volcanos in this place. You should avoid buying expensive footwear for hiking, because many of the rocks here are “scoria” which can damage even the best shoes. Near those volcanos are many small town, that have many motels and places to eat. You should also try to eat in some restaurant at the countryside, they’re more expensive but they’re worth it. Also, countryside restaurant are maneged by countryside people, wich can be very nice people, but also very proud people. One thing that you should never do in the countriside is belittle the work of these people, they take it very seriously, so that’s a big no no; this rule also applies for the people at Chiloé island, specially them. That’s all folks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Los lagos is the tenth region of Chile, it's located between the 40°13 y el...
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... side of the region. You could do all of this just in one week, because dedistanc...
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...ar for hiking, because many of the rocks here are 'scoria' which can da...
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Suggestion: belittled
...u should never do in the countriside is belittle the work of these people, they take it ...
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...e the work of these people, they take it very seriously, so that's a big no ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
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...t very seriously, so that's a big no no; this rule also applies for the people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68333333333 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.558428337 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593333333333 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6292948342 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.357142857 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 5.45110844103 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0293294820919 0.236089414692 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00729714662101 0.076458572812 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263102363066 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0210864124073 0.150856017488 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298206904082 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.