We all work or will work in jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.
Most people spend approximately one-third of the day in their workplace, and how much love in their jobs depends on colleagues who could bring about a magnificent atmosphere in the office. I am of the opinion that there are two properties such as being supportive and professional which would be explored in the following paragraphs.
First of all, working with colleagues who are supportive could make him work more confident, which bring our works into a marvelous level. In fact, it is a wonderful feeling when there is someone who stands behind him and be a backup when he needs hands. On the other hand, without backup, he would be nervous and create a lot of mistakes because he would not know that his works correctly. My brother’s experience is a compelling example of this. About five years ago, he started his job as an architect after he graduated from college. With his a little experience in working, he did a lot of mistakes in drawing the layout plan because he was not used to the software which is not the same one he used in the university. But luckily, his seniors had always help and taught him what should be done or not. After involving in that team, he has developed his skills and become a more perfect architect. He did fewer mistakes compare to that five years ago, he gained such confidence and his work was published into Asia’s architect journal. He said that without his supportive mates, he could not be here at the top of Asia.
Secondly, teammates with a sense of professionalism are desirable because they help to maintain effective working ambient. People who behave in a professional manner is less likely to act in lazy less likely to act in a lazy fashion or pass their own responsibilities off to others. For instance, last summer, my company had overwhelmed by a ton of projects because it was our high season. However, with the boss’s bidding strategies, we won the tremendous renovation project which a lot of effort and concentration were needed to finish this project. Everyone has to work overtime than usual and no one blaming or showing some joylessness. Otherwise, we kept our cool and maintained a professional demeanor, and we were able to get through the season.
In conclusion, I am of the opinions that being helpful and being professional in jobs are the considerable superb characteristics that the splendid co-workers should have. That’s because it could lead us to create fewer mistakes and also bring about effective working environments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 766, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a professional manner" with adverb for "professional"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tive working ambient. People who behave in a professional manner is less likely to act in lazy less like...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a lazy fashion" with adverb for "lazy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ikely to act in lazy less likely to act in a lazy fashion or pass their own responsibilities off ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...we were able to get through the season. In conclusion, I am of the opinions that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90654205607 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93989116871 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532710280374 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6904749198 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139712411468 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436171035396 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448755389504 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863208009425 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419082429458 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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