What are some important qualities of good supervisor. use specific details ans examples to explain why these qualities are important
The any manufacturing industry work’s on group of peoples or on the organization which present in that industry. Everyone has their own responsibility according to their nature of job, and everyone has required informing detailing report of his responsibility to his boss or the manager. I think for proper working of any industry boss having some important qualities which are explain in following essay.
First, any supervisor or bosses have capable to take right decision in any situation. We see in industry many company are grows because of taking right decision on right time, and the decision taking authority is only for the manager or bosses. We also see many examples in industry taking wrong decision is harmful for company’s growth. When I was complete my degree I join a manufacturing industry. After three month of joining my boss is handover me one project which name is “AIR PRODUCT”, and after studying details of project I was conclude that the project makes company loss. I was reported details reasons of losses but my boss not taking any action on my reporting. After complete finishing of project it founds that the project are make company loss around ten million and it was a big loss for any company.
Second, good boss is always supportive to their respective employees or workers. When any boss supports their employee in different condition it always helps to improve confidence and it motivate the employee. In Indian culture we are celebrate “Dashehra” on that day we decorate office and do “pooja” of all equipment which use we regularly and also organise small drama on any controversial topic related to current situation. In this year our manager is also participate on that drama, this situation and support of our boss is always inspirational and motivational for us. When any employee do best work in his filed the responsibility of any boss is to increase confidence and motivation of his.
In conclusion, the good boss have a quality of taking right decision on right time, and he is support to his respective employee or worker in every condition because it always motivation and inspiration for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12011173184 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07736176389 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483240223464 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1562804185 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5625 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0775324667741 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301166483227 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521247677841 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0599329870755 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040411849196 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.