Do you agree or disagree with following statement. It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Use specific reason and examples to support your answer.
When working in any organization, teams are assigned for a particular project. In every team, the team leader is chosen for single point of contact. The team leader has more responsibility than other team member. He is also responsible for various decisions taking on a problem on their assigned project. The leader of any team has several benefits as well as he has also required fulfilling his responsibility. I am disagreed above statement, in my opinion it is good opportunity to lead a team as team leader. In following essay I will explain the supporting reasons and examples to my opinion.
Firstly, team leader has a better chance to shine in team or in organization. When team successfully completed their project with in time limit it all credit goes to team leader. When I was working in company, the organization gives a new project to our team and the project name is “Air Product”. Organization select me as a team leader, when we are successfully completed our project that time company organized a grand party and felicitated me as a team leader and gives me promotion. But on other hand when project fails, the leader has to ready face all problems.
Secondly, the team leader has over many responsibilities also he needs to keep up collaboration in team. When team working together, the team member has their different opinion on various problem and it is hard to find less costly and suitable solution on problem. If the possible solution is get wrong, the organization is consider leader is responsible for that failure. He has also responsible for completing a project with in time limit. But when you are a team member, you don’t have need to take any responsibility. You are no responsible for collaboration in team also you are less responsible for completion of project within a time limit. In other word you are free to ride when you did your work.
In conclusion, in my opinion it is better to lead a team. The team leader has several responsibilities but he has chance to shine in team, also company consider his effort towards the work and offer him promotion. The leader has required taking risk on a problem and he is responsible for that decision.
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...he is responsible for that decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85411140584 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01323457976 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42175066313 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7039860801 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1818181818 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1363636364 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104615710378 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473812324224 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378054514838 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743423393221 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251532247751 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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