What discover in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reason and example to support your choice.
We have discovered many things in the last 1 century; however, some things was still used and improved during the present. Several people might choose some things most beneficial to them, and others preferred other things was better than them. In my opinions, I think that the best advantage of discover was petrol and I have a lot of reasons for support my reasons: to transport, and to make electricity.
To begin with, almost transportation including vehicle, aircraft and ship need to use petrol to be supply in the present. Actually, transportation or communication may move to many places to success for business in the modern time. For example, Somchai ,who is the famous investor about electronic instrument need to contact abundant customers to benefit of his business. Without a doubt, he has to travel a lot of places by vehicle for national customers , by plane for international customers. He had to travel more than 20 times in the last month including in the country and overseas. From the this reason, we can conclude that the petrol is the best important transportation and communication because of traveling.
Second of all, the electricity is mainly important thing to people in the world, almost all countries use electricity for living such as cooking, entertainment, manufacturing for industry and agriculture for farming. Exactly, the petrol is one of source for producing electricity. For instance, the countryside in Lampang province where is many high hills. Actually, the electricity system can not come to rural place, so many villagers need to make electricity own used by using petrol convert to electricity.
All in all, we can conclude that the most advantage discover in last 1 century for people was petrol because it can support almost all living, business and working in the present time. Moreover, it can still help all people more convenience in their lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, as to, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16720257235 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96011593097 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527331189711 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2917140641 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.133333333 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19318277531 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633765768085 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034983747959 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119322911578 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188557175681 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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