What do you believe is the most important problem facing the world today? Why is it the most important? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Climate change is one of the most complex issue facing by the world. Carbon dioxide, the heat-trapping greenhouse gas, which is necessary to make an earth appropriate place to live. But that has driven recent global warming. I will explain in detail about climate changes in my ensuing essay.
First, human activities play an important role in increasing greenhouse gases, which is leading to a global warming. Heat in the atmosphere increased because of emission from burning coal, gas and oil in power plant and automobiles. Similarly, cutting down trees also cause global warming because trees consume carbon dioxide to make food. That reduces greenhouse gases in the environment.
Secondly, climate changes are the main cause for various calamities. Numerous places get flooded because of abundant rain. Whereas, various palaces became desert which caused by the over heat waves. That places are not suitable for the humans and animal species to live. For example, in 2017, Harvey hurricane came to Houston which destroyed most of the area of the city. It might be because of every day heat waves are increasing all over the world.
Lastly, even though, we stop emitting all greenhouse gases today, global warming and climate change will continue to affect future generations. In this way, humanity is “committed” to some level of climate change. To solve the problem at this stage we should reduce usage of the fossil fuel which increases greenhouse gases. Moreover, we should grow more trees to reduce carbon dioxide from the earth.
Let’s put in a nutshell, climate changes are warning signs for us. This crisis is not about one country or region. So, instead of taking individual steps international collaboration is extremely necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s get flooded because of abundant rain. Whereas, various palaces became desert which ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 282.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26595744681 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72889563464 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609929078014 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1212070992 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.7142857143 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4285714286 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.061468201121 0.236089414692 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0180535582013 0.076458572812 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039596763029 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0327902486345 0.150856017488 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233395981782 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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