what is the most important discovery or invention made by human beings in past 200 years.
think that with such enormous inventions in recent years, it may be so difficult to chose a most important invention or human creation. So, when I try to think about the most significant one, the electrical motors comes to my mind. In the history of humans, there are some several inventions that not only made people's life better, but also marked a paradigm shift in our life style and belief system. As the steam engines are believed to made the first industrial revolution, historians and technologists marked the invention of electric motors as the begining of second industrial revolution. The creation of such a technology paved the way for the creation of many other technologies and devices and today, they are an innevitable part of every accessory and gadget we use, from medical purposes to hobbies, and everywhere. My argument is that without electrical motors, we may hade not even be able to invent computers or telephones, or sending sattelites to the space.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Think
think that with such enormous inventions in r...
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Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'motors'' or 'motor's'?
Suggestion: motors'; motor's
...he most significant one, the electrical motors comes to my mind. In the history of hum...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 1977.66487455 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 163.0 407.700716846 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9754601227 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82832066683 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 212.727598566 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668711656442 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 618.680645161 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.1689188602 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.166666667 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18844674068 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892074391091 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843475668717 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18844674068 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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