When choosing a job, it is more important to like the job than to make a certain amount of money.
With the rapid development of technology and science, each industry is filled with fierce competition for a job. Some people claim that earning amount of money is the most significant target when choosing the job, but others prefer to a job they like. As far as I am concerned, I agree with this hypothesis, there are 2 points have been written as below.
First, choosing a job that you like could reduce your working pressure. As we know, almost every person in this modern society are living in an environment filled with pressure, and the biggest influence factor is working, if you don’t like this job, all kinds of reasons will bring you a lot of negative influence. However, when you enjoy your job, everything surrounding you is wonderful in your eyes, which could provide you a positive attitude for facing challenges in the future.
Second, it also could earn a lot of money. ‘If you have an enthusiastic heart, everything is possible’, as the sentence said, what the very important is working with a positive attitude even if people are working in a normal career with a relatively low salary. Because your like could produce more strength and improvement and attract managers. For example, my roommate in college was majored in computer science, and worked as an engineer, although it costs a lot of time and energy of him, as the most enthusiastic person in his department, finally he become the youngest project manager.
Consequently, in my opinion, a high salary is a significant aspect either, but it is necessary that choosing your favorite job. The job that you like could alleviate your pressure and get same money as same as others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...oy your job, everything surrounding you is wonderful in your eyes, which could pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, second, so, thus, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 283.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90106007067 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70699054762 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572438162544 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.869821112 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.583333333 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264822765698 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109143957688 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1031029632 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171293747298 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735730127652 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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