Nowadays, our lives are full of information from different sources. Especially coming to purchase, consumers could see advertisement on TV, newspapers or magazines or get recommendation from salesperson. In my opinion, recommendations from friends or colleagues are the best reference for decision.
Firstly, unlike the salesperson, friends or colleagues cannot get any benefits by promoting certain products. They usually only recommend a product, only in the situation, that they actually used and enjoyed using this product. Therefore, their recommendation is more convincing than information from other sources.
Secondly, if I took the advice from friends or colleagues buying the same product, such as a car or a computer as theirs, I could ask them for help, in case I don't know how to use certain function of this product. Someone may argue that I could get more professional support from a salesperson in a store. But we all have the experience, that we waited on the hot-line for several hours without any solution to our problems about the product. It is more convenient to communicate with friends or colleagues. If they also don't know any solutions... what a good chance to create a valuable shared experience by researching on the product together with friends or colleagues!
Last but not the least, the recommendations from friends or colleagues could come from different information sources. They could also have done a lot of research on, including but not limited to information from the media or salesperson. Therefore, asking advice from friends or colleagues is the most effective way to collect the information about certain products. Statistic shows that each person get hundreds of pieces of advertisement through different medias every day. By asking several friends or colleagues, I could get more information than searching from other resources.
In conclusion, asking recommendations from friends or colleagues are the most convincing, easy and effective way to make a better decision on a major purchase.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.396875 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2037560354 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7910512937 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.588235294 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236423283631 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848612213381 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587801387527 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1531583736 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484291058311 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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