A good job has traditionally been seen as a stepping stone to a successful life. However, the definition of a good job is still debatable. Some companies encourage employees working longer than 40 hours per week by offering more payment. But I would definetely decline such an offer and chose the job with average pay and normal number of working hours.
The first reason for my stance is that more working time does not equate to a better working performance. Study shows that the people cannot focus on working for more than 10 hours a day without decline of effectivity. Employees need enough time for entertainment and leisure to relax their minds. After recharging, they could better devote themselves into the work. Therefore, a normal number of working hours is not only benifical to the mental health of employees, but also contribute to their productivity.
Secondly, less work time means more time for self-improving. An employee should always keep enough time for learning to better adapt to the new demands of the workplace. To give a specific example, for the past three months, I used my after-work time to learn a new programming language. With this knowledge, I got an offer with more payment and time flexibility. This experience proves the importance of chosing a job with sufficiant time for myself.
Last but not the least, more pay does not necessarily result in happiness. Though people could get their materialistic desires satisified with money, but money brings less long-term benifits to people. Once people sacrifice their time to money, it can create a high level of stress for him. What is the point of more payment, if people can only work under the stress?
Therefore, I would encourage people to take a job with normal number of working hours and average pay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97350993377 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74168986128 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55298013245 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8539867231 48.9658058833 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.0526315789 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24231343325 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822152526512 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827912096548 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170705833472 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999265143811 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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