When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
I have once heard a lecture on TED talks, the topic is about traits of successful people. The lecturer mentions about eight traits that successful people may have such as passion, persistence, improvement but without luck. Therefore, I am personally agree with the video and the statement that hard work make people successful.
First of all, a good personality leads to success and hard work can cultivate such personality. We all human have bad habits or part sides of laziness. We can improve ourselves to become better ones by putting more efforts on changing ourselves. For example, some people like smoking and quit smoking is difficult for them. Most successful ex-smokers quit smoking because of their hard work. They do their best to resist the temptation and desire for smoking. Only if they determine their mind and work hard can lead them successfully quit smoking.
Secondly, knowledge is important for people to success and it can't not be acquired by luck. The accumulation of knowledge is depends on hard working. The more efforts you pay the more knowledge you get. For instance, my college is going to apply for top ten universities for master degree. The basic language requirements of these school are TOEFL score 100 or higher. He can only study hard to enhance his proficiency in English and work hard to meet the requirement.
Last but not least, hard work can provide a chance for what you really want. Take myself for example, I am interested in Spanish so I apply for the school course in learning Spanish. Since I am not the native-speaker, it is hard for me to pronounce correctly and speak well. Therefore, I have to pay more efforts and work harder in order to catch up with my classmates. I spend twice time on practicing speaking Spanish and I even search for the online-course to make up for my lack. Thanks to my hard work, I can communicate with Spanish now.
In conclusion, people success because of their hard work more than depends on luck. There are some requirement and temptation that can only rely on hard working. It is also why people should always improve and spur themselves.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for the government to spend money on new buildings than to preserve historic or traditional buildings and homes. 71
- When people succeed it is because of hard work Luck has nothing to do with success Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position 74
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... important for people to success and it cant not be acquired by luck. The accumulati...
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Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
... important for people to success and it cant not be acquired by luck. The accumulati...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rk, I can communicate with Spanish now. In conclusion, people success because of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85479452055 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71999194197 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531506849315 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.0257089224 48.9658058833 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.88 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.48 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199396026879 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636537494858 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573336265313 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123849579056 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262839497429 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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