When students move to a new school, they sometimes face problems. How can schools help these students with their problems? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
When students move to another school might be challenging, their connection with their previous school no longer exists and they have to adapt to this new unfamiliar environment. The school principal should prepare a program to assist new students to feel welcomed including teachers and present students.
Initially, one of the problems that students might face in a new school is adaptation. Adaptation is difficult as a human begins. People do not like changing and adapting to a new environment requires us to focus more. Moreover, some students have difficulty making new friends, and fear of losing their previous friends makes them not want to try either. Also, some students might not be good at communication skills and they might have problems performing their tasks appropriately. Under these circumstances, teachers should take the initiative to help the new students to resolve their problems. Furthermore, students have never experienced a transition like this before and they do not have to deal with it. However, since schools receive new students every year, teachers should be mindful of what could be going wrong with the new integrant.
Secondly, when students move to a new school, bullying is another issue that they might face and newcomers are frequently the victims. If schools have developed a program, it might help the students not get bullied. Additionally, programs that schools should include to help students to interact with others dynamically and respectfully such as dance, drama, and poetry clubs.
Other programs that the school should offer are tours guided because often school buildings are big and new students have trouble finding specific areas for example the library or the toilet. Therefore, teachers can assist as well by being attentive and should keep an eye on the new students until they adjust to the new atmosphere.
Overall, maintaining a healthy, compassionate atmosphere is a good way to help students deal with the challenges, which they may face when they move to another school. Finally, parents and children feel safe, secure, and welcomed when new schools have a positive and welcoming environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19476744186 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6659100623 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502906976744 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 344.0 20.1344086022 1709% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1787.0 100.406767564 1780% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 344.0 20.6045352989 1670% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 123.0 5.45110844103 2256% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452796194555 0.236089414692 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.452796194555 0.076458572812 592% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289051709833 0.150856017488 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337964827243 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 175.0 11.7677419355 1487% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -269.22 58.1214874552 -463% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 136.3 10.1575268817 1342% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.3 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.42 8.01818996416 305% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 10.002688172 580% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 139.6 10.0537634409 1389% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 175.0 10.247311828 1708% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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