When you are deciding which of the two places to visit, should you:
1. Discuss with someone who has visited the two places.
2. Read online
When we are making choice which of the two places to visit, some people prefer to have some discussion with friends who has visited the two places, claiming that they might give us several beneficial advices. However, from my point of view, reading online could be a better and advisable option for us.
On one hand, information online is more comprehensive. To be specific, we can just simply put several keywords into a search engine, a array of comments come into the picture. People around the world who have come to those two places would leave their opinions, feelings, and suggestions about places. Therefore, we can obtain an overall and objective information of the two places. Meanwhile, the internet provides us with more details. For example, websites online can teach us step by step how to book flights and hotels, how to check in and check out, so on and so forth.
On the other hand, reading online could promise up-to-date information. Although friends may have gone to the places several years ago, traveling policy, public transport routes of these locates might become different nowadays. Thus, what our friends provide is obsolete information. For instance, one of my friends Tina went to Chengdu several years ago. As it is known to all, significant changes have taken place in Chengdu: there are subways, more places of interests, and more international exhibits, which did not exist there. If I plan to have a trip in Chengdu, consulting Tine could be a silly decision.
Admittedly, friends of ours may know us better and can recommend scenic spots or restaurants of our interests. But personal opinions could be partial and subjective.
In a nutshell, in order to gain comprehensive and up-to-date information about traveling places, we'd better to search online.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... several keywords into a search engine, a array of comments come into the picture...
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Line 9, column 98, Rule ID: WED_WE_D[1]
Message: Did you mean 'we'd'?
Suggestion: we'd
...ate information about traveling places, wed better to search online.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08108108108 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7161826003 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8952645063 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4705882353 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211411612796 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573484282941 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863264146258 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110785246499 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120884931424 0.0645574589148 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.