Where would you love to spend your free time, most people prefer to spend it indoor while others prefer to spend it outdoor. which would you prefer.
Generally speaking, I don’t always get to have free time, however when I do get free time I make sure I value it. I prefer to spend my free time indoor because I get to do the things I love which include; sewing, planning, reading and tidying the house.
As a person, I like a clean environment and probably during the week, I wouldn’t have time to clean my house or wash my clothes. So I use the free time I have to make sure I clear my room, wash, iron and arrange my cloth and clear my environment which is important for our life. I know is also important to have fun go out with friends, but it doesn’t count. Moreover most of the week I spend all the time out, feeling the sun and the fresh air and sometimes beaten by the rain so I see nothing special staying outside during my free period.
Secondly, having time to yourself is very crucial and is used very well. However, Sewing is the most fun thing I get to do indoors. I love sewing clothes, that is making a beautiful dress for my sisters and mother. So with the free time I have, I try as much as possible to make at least 2-3 complete dresses each day. You can imagine if I had actually stayed outside I wouldn’t have the time to make what I love to do the most and created a gorgeous dress for my mom and other people from which I make money out of it.
Thirdly, I love the privacy and is a very important part of my life and I love to spend it in my house where I get to tidy up the house and make a gorgeous dress.
- Where would you love to spend your free time, most people prefer to spend it indoor while others prefer to spend it outdoor. which would you prefer. 60
- In the past lecturers could teach a certain number of students in one lecture hall. With the development of new technology, it's hard to justify the reason to participate in the lecture physically and not via the Internet. Do you agree or disagree wi 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11148648649 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36941406074 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489864864865 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.970555173 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.416666667 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193390218163 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753246930779 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074537579112 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129872115579 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525308886862 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 58.1214874552 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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