whether people should learn from others or become individual for themselves in order to succeed
Nowadays, everyone in the society wants to be succeed, people are willing to get to their brilliant way to the success. Thus a reasonable mean is the key to be achievable, which means that we can make full use of our energy in a appropriate way to become success. Therefore an interesting discussion has arisen: whether people should learn from others or become individual for themselves in order to succeed? In my opinion, I insist that it is better to be like others in our life. My points and examples are given below.
Learning from others is convenient and effective. As every elite has a special method to help them become success, and most of the people are expert in imitating from others. So we can take these elites as the examples, communicate more with them and try to copy their special methods in their daily behaviors. Then you might find that the method is really novel to you and you can become interest in the methods. And then you can adjust a little to these tackles which enable them to be suitable to yourself. So you can gradually be proficient in these methods in a relatively short time to help you become success. For instance, when I firstly came into the high school, I was always failed in math. However, one of my classmate, Jack, is very good at math. So I always tried to talk with him and closed to him. When I got these math classes or assignment again, I always analyzed his study methods. Then after one week, I’ve known his methods that I should devote myself to thinking in the math, not just only received what the teacher said into my ears. Since then, I tried to follow this mean and had a break when I felt tired after doing that. Finally, it becomes my own and my math has improved a lot. As a result, the above example can fully prove that learn from Jack to improve my math skills is convenient and effective.
It might become misleading to behave different from everybody else. Make yourself individual can be suitable to your own development indeed and let you become more attractive but it can be easily influenced by your own personality. Everyone have their own criterion and interest in his life. Let’s say, if you are lazy and do not enjoy competing with others or confronting the challenges, you might be less competitive in the society and your behavior is less worthwhile. Therefore, you might get far away from the real success and just stay in your own comfort zone, which might become less efficient. What’s more, it might take more time for you to find a probable way to suit yourself. Because you cannot always make sure that the method is really useful and practical. However, learn from others’ formative habits can help us avoid some twists and turns in our life and they can urge you to work harder all the time, which is more efficient than your personal development.
Admittedly, I am not saying that being different from others is not effective. They can make us become more creative and innovative but also make ourselves feel more comfortable in our life. But it is really a small point compared to the advantage of the imitation from others. Due to the limitation of the space, I am unable to give more information about the topic. But I believe that the examples and explanation above can fully prove the validity of my point of view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 86.0 43.0788530466 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2749.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 592.0 407.700716846 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64358108108 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93265142912 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53102947145 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471283783784 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 881.1 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9023099073 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.90625 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09375 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239098805374 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676576815566 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131744341936 0.0737576698707 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169906108553 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121625697968 0.0645574589148 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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