Which do you think contributes most for an enjoyable vacation?
a. Good food
b. Good location
c. Good friends to travel with
People put emphasis on different things when it comes to what factors make an enjoyable vacation. In my opinion, having good friends to travel with is the most important factor contributing to a happy vacation. My reasons are as follows.
To begin with, good friends make me feel not lonely during my trip. To illustrate, I often travel alone due to business and sometimes I feel lonely during my trip. However, I feel happy when I can meet friends in my trip, even though we just meet for a meal or one day. In contrast, I usually have good food and stay at luxury hotels, but I don’t feel excited about it. Consequently, good friends are more important for me in my trips.
Secondly, good friends are willing to solve problems encountered during our travel and make the trip adventurous. To be more specific, we will come across many problems in a place that we are not familiar with, so it is very important to be ready to overcome the difficulties. For instance, one friend of mine never loses temper and she always keeps a positive attitude when we meet troubles during our trips. Moreover, every time we solve a problem during our trip, we feel a sense of achievement and this makes our trip more interesting. That is, having a good accompany allows me to have an exciting trip.
Last but least, a good friend will create a beautiful memory with me whereas food and location do not. It is true that delicious food and fantastic location are important as well, but without a good accompany, they are actually boring. What’s more, if I have good friends to travel with me, we can turn a dull place into an enjoyable one full of our laugh. For example, three years ago my good friends and I stayed at a normal house during our trip. We went to a supermarket and cooked by ourselves. Although the house was not a fancy resort and the food was not like Michelin food, we had a pleasant time. It was such a good memory that we still talk about very often today.
In summary, I hold the view that a good accompany is most important to a good vacation because we can create beautiful memory and overcome difficulties together. On the other hand, delicious food and fancy location would turn boring without good friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, whereas, for example, for instance, i feel, in contrast, in summary, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54782259979 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0796684205 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2727272727 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77272727273 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319031732922 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111241384913 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888405014024 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207032784619 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496731008858 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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