Which of the following lessons did you learn from your family? 1.kindness 2.honesty 3.independence ? Why was this lesson important to you?
Family is plays a significant role in our society. The lesson that I learn from my family is Kindness. Kindness is a very important characteristic of a person's life. No matter how bad human being you are still, you have a little bit of kindness in your personality. I will be tackle about my own views about kindness on the following paragraph.
In my view, Kindness can be consider an humble act of personality because in this way, people will like you somehow. For example, when I was young I have a auntie who is very kind to me, she always prepare everything I need for school, she will cook, she will iron my uniform and take me to school kindness in this way plays a significance role. On the other hand, I return the kindness to my auntie through humble act of personality I was able to help her together with her family on their lives and able to meet their needs.
Another thing is, kindness is one way of being connected and attach to some other people because of connection to some other people you can build up a good relationship. For example, I have a friend who wants to go to a prestigious university but the problem is she has no money and lack of resources, however, as a friend of her I recommended and offer her my help. I will help her to the best of my capability and she promise she will pay me back as soon as she gets a job.My friend was very happy and jumping up for joy when she realized I will help her.Through act of kindness you can able to connect and make people happy same with your family if one your family family member needs a helping hand and unable to meet your sibling needs with this act of kindness you can entrust anything to your family.
To end up my essay, I therefore conclude that kindness will begin inside your family, if you build up kindness inside your family you apply that kindness in the outside world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...is a very important characteristic of a persons life. No matter how bad human being you...
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Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...d human being you are still, you have a little bit of kindness in your personality. I will...
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Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... In my view, Kindness can be consider an humble act of personality because in th...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...w. For example, when I was young I have a auntie who is very kind to me, she alwa...
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Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prepares'.
Suggestion: prepares
...ntie who is very kind to me, she always prepare everything I need for school, she will ...
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Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'promises'.
Suggestion: promises
...er to the best of my capability and she promise she will pay me back as soon as she get...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...l pay me back as soon as she gets a job.My friend was very happy and jumping up fo...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Through
...r joy when she realized I will help her.Through act of kindness you can able to connect...
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Line 5, column 662, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: family
...happy same with your family if one your family family member needs a helping hand and unable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, another thing, for example, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35816618911 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47838580605 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467048710602 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.287529882 48.9658058833 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.75 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0833333333 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267678783195 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115233658104 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813756894336 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197292904981 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712585121609 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.6 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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