Which one is better Money or Education

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Which one is better; Money or Education?

Which one is better; Money or Education? This is a little complicated question since money and education are interrelated to each other in which, it possible that one with money can buy education and one with education can earn money. It’s impossible for everyone to have good fortune with doing very little to achieve it and also there are only a few in the world who have affluent parents who bequeathed a big wealth to them to consume it as spendthrifts. By and large, earning money not easy and one can earn who can be persevered, be competitive, and educated. However, there are people who can earn money smoothly from winning of lottery, gambling, and other easy works sometimes illegally as well. Good Education is steps that paving the way for fundamental practices and methodologies by which one can earn money. A well-educated one can find jobs, establish new business, establish new practice or create technology to earn good fortune. There are many examples from well-educated persons who have been created and running successful businesses such owner of Facebook, Apple, and Amazon. The education, avid and decent works are main factors which enable them to climb the corporate ladders and being examples of who changes their situation from have not to have. Meanwhile, there are many dropouts from higher education institutes who struggle to earn plenty of money, and they are devastating from their business and life. It means that every single educated one does not be rich or prosperous unless he mix talent with well-understand, learn and follow up it in their life since life in that world is about haves and haves not in whether to be prosperous which no one can neglect it. Education is also can support us for implementing multitask and be a successful business owner. Figure out that one has big fortune with running big business thus every employee should in awe of him. If he doesn’t be educated, he does not be able to run the business smoothly. His education will help him in major field such as finance, management, communication, leadership, problem-solving and task filtering. By and large, there is need for practices and methodologies for being successful and having fortune in other having these, education is a clue for having every part. Neither one who has money cannot manage it without education nor one who has education cannot say that he isn’t using it for earning money. The money earnable under the aegis of good education which provides us a bright future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1519, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mixes'.
Suggestion: mixes
...oes not be rich or prosperous unless he mix talent with well-understand, learn and ...
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Line 1, column 1700, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prosperous which no one can neglect it. Education is also can support us for imp...
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Line 1, column 2511, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion which provides us a bright future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, well, while, in fact, such as, by and large

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95486935867 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77079377473 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484560570071 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1001232197 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.888888889 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3888888889 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41776236476 0.236089414692 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183861569246 0.076458572812 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.2352090382 0.0737576698707 319% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.41776236476 0.150856017488 277% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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