Which one is better in your opinion? it is better to the governments spend as much money as possible exploring outer space like traveling to the moon or other planets, or they should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth.
I think that both are equally important and governments should find golden middle in those investments. Spending money on basic needs on earth are of great significance, majority of world's population live in or on the edge of poverty, certainly there has to be something done about that. It is in human's nature to seek and explore new things, so a logic path for our future is to discover and reveal secrets of space and our existence. In a few chapters I’ll try to elaborate and explain more about these two sides and topics.
First let’s talk about basic needs for living on the earth because it is happening now and is very important. As I said in the introduction of this essay, majority of people on earth live in poverty. In the third world countries people die from hunger, infective diseases, thirst, and the weather conditions. All of those factors are preventable and a good plan and investment of money can be the solution. Providing countries in transition with enough money for food, medical supplies, drinkable water, shelters, living spaces, education, can surely improve quality of life for those people and help those countries on their path of development.
One thing that is common for the basic needs and space exploration is education. In developing countries education is a key factor for improvement. educated population and citizens can contribute in country’s stability, economy, trade, health, development, infrastructure and reducing poverty. Education is also a key factor for the space exploration, without it there will not be engineers, mathematicians, physicists, chemists and other experts who are crucial for the space missions.
In the distant future we as civilization may be forced to leave our planet and colonize other place to live in, maybe we will find another earth to live on. Research missions, space crafts, telescopes and scientific stuff who work on these projects all require money that has to be invested now and in the future, actually money income for this purpose has to be constant. There are currently projects searching for exoplanets and one of them is called ‘Kepler’ I believe, on which work huge number of volunteers beside scientists and this project until now has found very interesting discoveries that give us hope that there are maybe other inhabitable planets.
I think that governments should invest in both, basic needs and space exploration as they are very important for our society and survival. Fulfilling basic needs is key for the present and investing in space exploration is key for the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Educated
...cation is a key factor for improvement. educated population and citizens can contribute ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, so, third, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15094339623 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93505409521 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52358490566 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3213616115 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280299136646 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893126923393 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680002090064 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162913562618 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471213405702 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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