Living in the city or Living in the countryside
What is life like living in several places that contributed to our positive attitudes and interesting atmospheres? There are lots of pros and cons of dwelling in different places. From my view, living in the countryside is much better compared to living in the city which is always crowded with noises and other disturbances.
To commence with, rural living is the nicest atmosphere which poses us plenty of healthy things and environment.Firstly,we all eat locally-grown food that are all organic and nutritious. Moreover,every time will be peaceful with the sounds of birds chirping and leaves rustling in the wind. These will be the main causes why people in the countryside are healthier and filled with enjoyment.
Vividly, since there is a reasonable number of rural dwellers, there will be more space to live, putting us closer to nature and away from the hustle and bustle of the city. Living expenses are also equitable with comfortable accommodation with green trees and forests. It is also spacious for us to go for a walk or go fishing under the clear blue sky. Life will be more meaningful with attractive flora and fauna while city dwellers are all struggling with disturbing noises,narrow house and high living cost.
On the contrary,weather is one of the major factors for the drawback of rural lifestyles such as some hazardous disasters.Also,they lack of having knowledge about using modern gadgets and worldwide news.These days, government is trying to provide those rural dwellers with some modern facilities to be up-to-date with those new stuffs.
In conclusion,it is acceptable that living in the countryside is peaceful and reasonable to stay.All those times gazing at the natural scenarios and views cannot be replaced with anything to live longer and happier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23489932886 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10448935426 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570469798658 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9617952767 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187078535143 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688578513779 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620063774217 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125930220774 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770070778969 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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