Which one is the most important factor to help you work productively:
A. Having an environment free of noise and distractions;
B. Knowing that you will receive a reward;
C. Doing something you are interested in.
Without a shadow of a doubt, productivity has played a prominent role in our individual's life. And human tries to find a way to improve work efficiency. Big companies always look for productive employees or how to increase their employees' productivity. Scientists have done much research to find out what are the most critical factors in this subject, and they have many different opinions. The controversial question which arises here is which of these elements is most important. I firmly believe that do something that I am interested in is better and more beneficial and help my productivity. There are numerous reasons, two of which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
The first reason coming to my mind is that it is a motivation and push me to future like an engine. When I interest in the subject, I will enjoy to study or work in that, and always want to know more about it or go forward to its high level. Whatever I progress in it, I will enjoy more. So it helps me to work harder and improve my productivity. As a case in point, my friend and I were looking for a job when we were twenty years old. He just wanted a job, and it was no matter what it is, but it is essential to find a job that I like it. We found the same position that I loved to work in, but my friend did not have any interest. It caused I worked so hard and enjoyed it, also I had to increase my productivity to do it better since I wanted more. But he did not try to work better because he did not like it. Now I am the manager. Still, he is a simple employee.
Furthermore, one should not neglect the fact that it makes us happier. When I do my interests, I enjoy it and try to get more. I think it is necessary to enjoy life, because everything that I do, to finding happiness. If something does not make me happy, it will make me disappointed, so I cannot do it. I must do something which helps me to be glad. So I constantly try to achieve happiness. I think when I do my attention, I will be happy. From the scientific perspective, happiness is a definition and has many means, but all of them agree that attain favorites make a human happy. So working in interest is happiness.
In conclusion, what is the main factor of productivity is a challenging issue and heated debate, I believe that doing something that I interest in is better, for it motivates me to work and make me happy. It is highly recommended that people should find a job which they interest in instead of its money or its possession.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 372, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, still, i think, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 89.0 43.0788530466 207% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77494692144 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.77085039785 2.67179642975 179% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473460721868 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6248001714 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5517241379 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2413793103 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86206896552 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116496045738 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470932493686 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431483289017 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679372517897 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609045237534 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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