Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other
dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your
answer.
There can be many reasons why people enjoy doing dangerous activities or sports. In my opinion, I have narrowed it down to two reasons that I will explain in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, adrenaline, the adrenaline rush you feel when doing something exciting, is the first reason why people enjoy doing those kinds of activities. You can feel like you are on top of the world and, everything is possible. One time, I was at the beach, my family was jumping off the boat, it was the open sea and, deep, and there was no nothing around us. I was terrified to jump. I am afraid of the ocean but after a few minutes of trying to convince myself that a shark was not going to attack me. I jumped, it felt amazing. I did no think once about being in danger. That is how adrenaline works.
Secondly, is how alive you feel after doing something exciting, that can be very addicting. You do not necessarily feel alive while buying groceries. That feeling comes with doing something that is not as safe as walking your dog. I remember the time my step-mother did parasailing. She mentioned how alive she felt, a feeling she had never experienced in her life, she even did twice on that trip we went. Some people thrive on that feeling and want to experience it more often. I think it makes you appreciate your life way more, life can become a little boring, and we can fall into a routine. But doing those activities, it makes you more grateful to be alive and experience all the amazing things life has to offer.
In conclusion, some people are like doing dangerous activities, for the adrenaline rush that you get after doing them. And for how alive it can make you feel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53947368421 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48145606871 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536184210526 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2286214766 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225951310662 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730505276283 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826933338068 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168060273248 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484096321284 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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